Big Idea: Clothes and hair are proportion translators. When they ignore structure, they erase your hard work; when they support it, they double readability.
1) Clothing Pitfalls (and structural antidotes)Random fold noise.
Fix: Restrict to four families (tension, compression, gravity, motion-drag). One or two per garment per pose.
2) Hems without ellipses.
Fix: Skirt/jacket hems wrap the body as ellipses; their tilt echoes pelvis/ribcage.
3) Oversized hoodie swallowing the torso.
Fix: Show shoulder slope and ribcage plane with two strategic folds and a neck opening ellipse.
4) Armor that destroys silhouette.
Fix: Fewer, bigger plates; align edges to limb straights; keep knee/elbow boxes readable.
5) Belts that ignore pelvis tilt.
Fix: Align belt to pelvis ellipse; if the character bends, the buckle shifts accordingly.
6) Props that float.
Fix: Strap tension changes posture; scabbards follow thigh angle; heavy items demand counterbalance.
7) Hair Pitfalls (and mass-first cures) Strand soup.
Fix: Design 2–4 masses first; carve a few tapered accents; leave breathing space.
8) Helmet hair (floating off scalp).
Fix: Conform hair base to skull; let volume expand away from the scalp gradually.
9) Motion denial.
Fix: Hair lags the body; echo the LOA with delayed arcs and grouped tufts.
Spot the Mistake (Ch. 27):
- Skirt drawn as a straight line at the bottom of the thighs (no volume).
- Hair silhouette spiked everywhere with no rhythm → steals the read from the body.
- Belt perfectly horizontal while pelvis is tilted.
Checklist (Ch. 27):
- Do garments show ellipse logic and fold families tied to pose?
- Does hair read as big masses that echo/counter the LOA?
- Do accessories/props change posture (weight) instead of hovering?
Study Hook (≤10 min):
Redraw one of your figures twice: (A) clothing stripped to two fold families, hems as ellipses; (B) hair reduced to three masses with 2–3 tapered accents. Compare silhouettes—did clarity and proportion read improve?